its time grow up,
the crying
and blaming
won’t ever be enough
this world is tough
to try to force it
as anything other
will only bring you to suffer
if your swimming upstream
you have to learn
to assert your dreams
control your feelings
and harness your ego
cause if you don’t,
then life will have it’s go
and it’s way
with your doubt
and your insecurities
your weaknesses
and obscurities
and in reality,
you’re gonna
hurt one way or another
whether you face
your truth or not
so why cower?
why play the victim?
why diminish
before you have finished?
why live life
flinching
accept the conditions
and start thickening
your skin
cause time often leaves
behind those
can’t become
their realest
and that’s real
– B. Brown
This is my first spoken word audio. Please, tell me what you think and help me to improve
The only thing I see that needs any kind of correction or change is the word cause. On paper, I would write it ’cause but I understand it’s meant to be because. Other than that, I don’t see anything wrong with it. This speaks greatly to me. 🙂
thank you 🙂
You’re welcome!
Beautiful and inspiring
beautiful, and very well written hun! Love seeing your new material everyday. It inspires me to keep writing at least something everyday !
thank you 😀
Brilliant!
thank you ❤