afraid to move
too suddenly
for the wind to carry
my scent
off to who knows where
to who knows who
for if they came for me now
they’d take all
I had left to lose
– B. Brown
While I’m Down
opening the mind and heart through poetry
afraid to move
too suddenly
for the wind to carry
my scent
off to who knows where
to who knows who
for if they came for me now
they’d take all
I had left to lose
– B. Brown
Ripe with tension
Just what I was trying do too. I’ve been practicing packing in as much tension as I can in fewest lines
Exactly the goal of my poetry.. very cool 😉
Nice one!
Thanks ❤️
Your welcome
Nice, B. Nice
Thank you so much 😀
Whoa! Nicely expressed!
Thank you 🙂
perfect.